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Grandpa’s Old Dusty Window
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A tall, ancient pine tree with years of memories
A blue Chevy Avalanche truck with gray lawn chairs in the bed
An old man sitting on a wooden bench under the old pine watching a lawn mower run on a string
I feel nine again
A little girl riding in his truck with the windows down and the radio on
The leaves gently blowing cool breeze outside
A rumbling motorcycle racing down the street
It felt as if I were really back at the age of nine
A little girl with brown pigtails and freckles
No worries
Playing in the backyard with her grandpa and little sister
It felt so real
I walked away from the window
It was love
Great job Lauren! You used so much imagery to explain everything. Even with the length it seemed as if I was experiencing this with you. Good job and keep writing.
Great Job Lauren! I really felt your emotions expressed throughout the article. I love the description and voice used, and I think this story is easy for people to relate too. Keep up the good writing.
This is a really cool poem!