Life and Death
Everyone in the small town of Carlton Minnesota knew Alice Fields. The Fields moved to town when Alice was about nine years old. Right away the other children could tell how odd Alice was. She still talked to imaginary friends. Parents began to whisper about how odd she was. All the children tried to ignore Alice and avoid her when possible. Alex Emmons thought of her as the strangest person in the world and often talked to his friends about her. Matt Jackson seemed to be the only child in town who did not avoid her. Unlike everyone else in town, Matt wondered about whom she was talking to instead of deeming her as crazy.
Matt would lurk around her house when she played in the back yard with her invisible friends. While everyone in town avoided her, he always secretly tried to see her or talk to her. With no one around, he often tried to talk to her but, so use to being avoided, she shied away from him every time.
One day he saw her on the street near her house. She and her family lived in a large, old three-story house with faded white paint covered in plants which grew all the way to the roof. The hinges of the dark blue shutters were rusted and beginning to fall off. The sidewalk leading to the threshold of the house had cracks and weeds sprouting out from them and the grass always looked as if it should have been cut two weeks ago. He walked up to Alice.
“Who do you talk to all the time?” he asked.
“People from the past who got stuck here,” was all she said and then walked around the corner, but when Matt followed her, she was nowhere to be seen. He wondered what she could have possibly meant by that for many days. At school his friend, Alex, continued to make fun of Alice while Matt ignored him. Alex told everyone Alice’s house was haunted. Boys dared each other to sneak in one night. This caught Matt’s attention. So obsessed with how mysterious Alice was, he wanted more then anything to see the inside of her house. The friends agreed to sneak out the next week and see whether it was haunted or not.
The following week Alex, Matt, and his friends gathered around the old, creepy house. They looked all around it and found an open window leading to the basement. They stared at it, no one wanting to go first. Finally Alex agreed to go first. Slowly and quietly he climbed into the window feet first. Spiderwebs and dust covered him but he managed to slip through the window with a short drop to the floor. The other boys followed with Matt sliding through last.
They turned on the flash lights and looked around. Everything looked as though it had been there undisturbed as long as the house had. There were spiders and dust were everywhere. They made their way to the bottom of the rickety looking staircase which led to the first level of the house. They stood in a deafening silence for a moment. This time Matt stepped forward to go first. His curiosity overcame his fear for what would happen if they got caught. As slowly as he could, he started up the stairs. The steps slightly creaked which made all the boys freeze in fear of being heard. He reached the top and slowly turned the doorknob. The door slowly opened to a long, dark hallway. Portraits lined the wall. Old, sad looking faces stared at him as he walked down the hall. The paintings were of every person to own the house since its construction. None of the people in the paintings had smiles. All straight faces with sad eyes. He tried to ignore the feeling of the eyes in the painting following him. He knew it was all in his head. He finally found an opening that led him into the living room.
Furnished with old-fashioned lamps, rugs, and curtains, and a great chandelier, he entered the room. He turned around to make sure his friends had followed, but he realized they had left him. The fear of being alone in the house engulfed him. Suddenly his curiosity disappeared and all he felt was fear. He started back for the hallway but stopped right where he stood. Alice, standing in the doorway, stared at him. He turned white as a ghost. They stared at each other for a long moment. Then Alice finally spoke.
“What are you doing in my house?” Matt, who was so shocked, took a few seconds to comprehend her question.
“I was curious to see what this place looked like inside.” She stared at him so he kept talking. “What you said to me last week about the people stuck here what did you mean by that?”
“I can see and talk to the people who owned this house before my family did.”
Matt stared at her, trying to figure out if she was joking or not. She was not. He swallowed the lump in his throat.
“How do I know you are not just lying to me?” He asked. She apparently did not like this question.
“Leave before I wake up my parent and tell them you broke into our home.” With that he slowly backed out of the room and left through the front door. He practically ran home. About to cross the street across his house, so concerned with getting home he did not look for cars coming.
Matt Jackson died that night. Everyone describes the process of dying as seeing white lights and floating up to Heaven. Matt did not experience any of this. He wandered around asking people for help but no one would even look at him. Eventually he saw Alice. So use to no one seeing him, he walked right past her and then heard her say his name.
“Matt, it is okay. I see you. You are not alone anymore.” Matt stopped in his tracks. He finally found someone to tell him why everyone ignored him. When he asked, she sadly and slowly said, “Matt, you’re dead…”
Chris Burke • Jan 25, 2016 at 1:06 pm
I definitely enjoyed this story. I found the Alice character to be a main line throughout the story. The suspense about what she actually meant made me want to keep reading. The emotion and imagery in the final paragraph is very intense because i can easily picture him walking alone feeling lost and then realizing that only Alice can see him.
Breanna Diedrick • Jan 24, 2016 at 6:38 pm
I really enjoyed this story! The vivid details and imagery helped me picture Alice’s house perfectly. Unlike Matt, I would not be brave enough to go inside her house. Reading about this was close enough for me. Really good job with details and tone! I almost felt scared and anxious reading this.
Dakota Krug • Jan 21, 2016 at 8:32 pm
I love this story!! The whole concept of death and the afterlife is very intriguing to me, so the title drew me in immediately. The imagery used in describing the basement was very vivid. I could relate to the boy’s fear as every step of my staircase has its creaks. As Cyan stated, I was not very surprised by the ending, but rather by Alice’s reaction to Matt intruding. I thoroughly enjoyed the story and it was a great read.
Cyan Rhine • Jan 20, 2016 at 12:33 pm
I found this story pretty interesting. At first I questioned whether Alice actually talked to the dead or if they were demons or something of a wicked nature, given her creepy house and solemn personality. I quite liked the imagery in the story, especially when reading about the stony-faced portraits lining the hallway. Living in an old, ramshackle house of my own, I can imagine how the townspeople would react; top that off with a little girl talking to ghosts and you’ve got yourself some good gossip about the newest stigma. The ending itself didn’t really surprise me but Alice’s reaction did. It made me think of Charon in Greek mythology, who takes the dead to Hades’ realm, and the loneliness he must feel. It made me wonder how she viewed herself, being able to see both the living and dead, but not really existing in either world. It really makes me wonder how her own family interacted with her, how Matt carried on, if any dead were malicious towards her, and so forth. All in all, I thought it was a good story!