Abortion- A Woman’s Right
Abortion is a sensitive and controvertial topic. Recently, Olivia Packard posted an article “Why Abortion Should be Stopped” on the Kings Courier. I read this article, and while the author had decent support for their argument, I disagree. I think abortion is a woman’s right for multiple reasons, and no one else should be trying to tell women what to do with their bodies.
The author of the article used Bible verses and God to justify the need to end abortion, however I don’t believe in God. To this I pose a question: Why should I, someone who doesn’t believe in God, follow the Bible’s teachings? Most people would answer you shouldn’t, but people still justify their need to control others with the Bible.
The author goes on to say even if a girl gets pregnant after being raped, they shouldn’t get an abortion. In my opinion, the girl is already going to have to live with the trauma of being raped, why make them raise the child of their rapist? It’s going to make it so much harder to move past their trauma when they have to wake up every morning and face the blood of the person who hurt them most.
Some of you might be thinking, why not give the child up for adoption? The foster care and adoption system in America are underfunded and overwhelmed with children. Most people think they want to be foster parents, but end up quitting after a year because it’s harder to take care of the children than one would think. As someone whose parents used to foster, it can be an extremely difficult task and is hard on the children. Why have a child just to throw them into a system that most people use for the money?
Another point I’d like to debunk is the child being alive from the moment of conception. A fetus doesn’t get its heartbeat until the third month, therefore, the child isn’t alive from the moment of conception. It’s simply a clump of cells, almost parasitic. Don’t believe me? The fetus wouldn’t be able to live without the mother. It gets its nutrients from the mother, it survives solely on the mother’s body. The fetus is not only not alive until the third month, but it’s also a parasite until it’s birthed.
Abortions can be unsafe, as the other author states, however pregnency is more likely to be fatal than an abortion. Many women have complications with pregnancy. According to the National Library of Medicine, the risk of dying from pregancy and complications is 14 times higher than safe abortions. Which brings me to the next point: If safe, legal abortions are stopped, abortions will still happen, however they’ll be illegal and more dangerous to the mother. Without legal abortions, the rate of death via abortions and complications of abortions will skyrocket.
I could go on forever on why abortions should not only be leagalized but also more accessable, but I think I’ve said enough. Your religion isn’t a valid reason to control someone else’s body. If a girl is raped, she has every single right to get an abortion. While putting the child up for adoption is an option, the foster care system is corrupt and overwhelmed. A fetus doesn’t get its heartbeat until the third month, therefore it’s simply a clump of parasitic cells until the third month in which it becomes a parasitic clump of cells with a heartbeat. And most importantly, abortion does have its risks, however pregnancy is 14 times more dangerous and unsafe abortions will cause more problems. So tell me, is it really worth making abortion illegal?
Emma Hildebrand • May 12, 2021 at 12:51 pm
Your article was very informative and interesting to read and you backed up all your information. Although I don’t agree with you at all. I feel that abortion is murder because God created us in his image. He knew evreything about us before we were born. God has a plan for us just like he did for all those baby’s that died because of abortion. I think that putting the baby up for adoption would be the best option instead of abortion.
Ava Hubner • May 5, 2021 at 10:19 am
I love this article. I totally agree and your facts make sense. I like how you give examples and questions people might ask with answers. Overall, this was a fantastic article. Keep up the great work!
Braylee Pierce • May 5, 2021 at 10:07 am
Faith, your article was very informative and interesting to read. This article helped me understand more about a topic I have strong feelings about. I agree with you completely, and you made very valid points in your argument. Backing up your opinion with a religious belief doesn’t make a strong argument because not everyone believes in God or at least the same one, some people believing in multiple. You kept your article very professional even when talking about such a sensitive topic. Thank you for sharing your opinion with us. 🙂
Jack Salyers • Mar 8, 2021 at 9:59 pm
Abortion is a very controversial topic in the eyes of all Americans. Faith you provide your examples and had an argument to say but I just can’t agree. I have two cousins who are adopted and I don’t want to hear the adoption card. I love them as family and I won’t want anything to happen to them. Also, I know of many people who adopted and take care of, and truly care for their kids. Faith, I disagree due to my values. Keep up the writing!
Madison Cummins • Mar 8, 2021 at 9:38 pm
I felt that this was a very interesting article Faith, and I do agree with some points. I overall respect your views and do see valid analysis on both sides.
Preston Parker • Mar 8, 2021 at 9:34 am
This is a great response and critique of another article on the site and I commend your passion and bravery to openly talk about and criticize another’s opinion. Maybe because I agree with you on the subject, but this feels way more professional and well-put together than most critiques that I’ve read online. Great work!
Rochelle Pense • Mar 5, 2021 at 2:11 pm
Amazing article Faith! I 100% agree with you. I really liked how you looked at the topic from a non-religious stand point, and supported it with credible sources. I also liked how you backed up your information from your personal experiences. I believe that it should be a woman’s choice on whether or not to get an abortion. Although I wish you would have mentioned that sometimes when a woman who experience infertility finally gets pregnant, something can go haywire and cause her pregnancy to either result in her, the baby, or both of them dying. Overall, really well written article. Keep up the fantastic work!
Tianna Casner • Mar 5, 2021 at 2:02 pm
This is such a great article! I agree 100% with everything you’ve stated in your article, Faith. I really hate when people justify things with their religion, when not everyone believes in the same God. Keep up the good work!